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ProjectComment is a Group that provides Guaranteed & Constructive comments for the deviantART community.

In order to support those efforts, we encourage dedicated users to give comments too. For those who are critics, artists, or just helpful in the community, we now offer something in return for all that you do - be it helping the participants of ProjectComment, or the group itself! This article focuses on awesome deviants, who have given fantastic comments, through excerpts of those comments and artwork by the deviants themselves!


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Gamal-the-rookie

Commented on Yukiryuu by schnurrDOSE.
Yukiryuu by schnurrDOSE
" When i saw this first in as an Thumbnail-pic, i thought; " This is A nice drawing!" That's a nice first impression that this Drawing gives.

Looking Closer to this drawing there are some things i cant really figure out. One would be the pose generally. I can see her fave bend towards me, but where are her back and chest? Is she standing "face off and looking back" - Or "standing shoulder towards me, with her face bend same way?"
[...]"
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dec chapter 1 front by Gamal-the-rookie
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VimislikArt

Commented on Supernatural by astarayel.
.:Supernatural:. by astarayel
" It looks neat and everything, but there's an incredible amount of dead space in this piece. I'm placing a vote in for putting in the braids, if only to fill in that space, especially with the hair looking unfinished (lack of details and the like). But really, just throw anything interesting, or shrink the piece down - all the visual interest in the bottom right is making this piece really unbalanced. [...]"
Here is a selection of work created by the Commenter, VimislikArt.

Boys and Spring by VimislikArt
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helice93

Commented on My Affection by akkajess.
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" Hi! I noticed this in the #ProjectComment galleries, and since you're also requesting a critique to this piece, I thought I'd leave you one.
First off, there are supposed to be 9 lines in a nonnet, where the number of syllables are 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1; however, you have 8 lines with syllable numbers 10-8-7-7-5-4-2-1. Also, a requirement is to have a iambic metre (unstressed and stressed syllables alternating with each other). So, if you want a perfect form, you need to rework it a bit. Writing fixed-form poetry is much harder than it seems, especially in a relatively "rigid" language like English, but you're halfway there - even more than halfway - and I admire your effort. Don't give up.
[...]"
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Strasbourg 34 by helice93
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LibertineM

Commented on Winter is Coming to an End... by Jo-Vix.
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" My first impression when I look at this piece is wow, look at the great textures in the frame, but with a portrait you want the focus to be on the characters. If you had some spare time, I understand that this was a time-sensitive piece, I would scale up the portrait so the frame wasn't so dominant. [...]"
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Undine by LibertineM
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CATtheMinion

Commented on Secret by Jo-Vix.
Secret by HIGhoNLifE16
" Self-portraits are a tried and true method of learning to draw faces. We're always there for ourselves! I like that you challenged yourself by changing your hair color, too. You've got a good start to layering the depth, by use of light and shadow - it's very clear that the chin is in front of the neck, and that the bottom lip has a curve to it. [...]"
Here is a selection of work created by the Commenter, CATtheMinion.

Come Together by CATtheMinion
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Dr-Aim

Commented on Sexy-Colorful-Alise by KeikoMagari.
.:Sexy, Colorful Alise:. by KeikoMagari
" Soooooo the first thing I'd like to say is...
"... okay let's go for some anatomy", because, well, there is no other way to put it than saying "hm yes some problems here."
So I thought a picture was worth thousands words and drew you a little something with some crappy words to explain myself
[...]"
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Best Grandma by Dr-Aim
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DayanDeVarlo

Commented on Secret by HIGhoNLifE16.
Secret by HIGhoNLifE16
" This is a great drawing. I just have one suggestion: work on lighting.

Right now the drawing is a little flat, and I don't think that's your fault but a result of the lighting you used.
[...]"
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Church38

Commented on Bears-eyes  2. by rememberingthelights.
Bears eyes 2. by rememberingthelights
" I'm not gonna lie, I think this is pretty amazing. I like how the eye is small, because often that's how animals that are staring right at you seem. [...]"
Here is a selection of work created by the Commenter, Church38.

Dirty FloorThe windows shut
faster than the wind blows
through whats left
Don't lie to me
I'm not so blind as to
not see your theft
I'll turn around and try to ignore
Maybe forever
I'll drop through the dirty floor
All the way down
I'll open my mouth if you open yours
So when you find me I'll still be hiding
The windows shut
faster than you can say
I can't complain
Tell me the truth
Did you steal the one thing
that kept me sane
I'll turn around and try to ignore
Maybe forever
I'll drop through the dirty floor
All the way down
I'll open my mouth if you open yours
When you find me I'll still be hiding
Is there something in the way
Between me and that light
Is there something I should say
To cure my jaded sight
Is there something I can do
To get my invite
I can turn around and try to ignore
Maybe for forever
I'll drop through the dirty floor
All the way down
I'll open my mouth if you'll only open yours
When you find me I'll still be hiding

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inacom

Commented on Disturbing-Thoughts by PoisonousPhotography.
Disturbing Thoughts by PoisonousPhotography
" think this is one of the best images from your asylum series. What makes it wonderful imo is the interplay of rectangles in the different patterns present in the picture. Most importantly, it is absolutely wonderful that you included the piece of clothing with its pattern. It puts the entire picture in perspective (not visual, but meaningful) and begins telling. [...]"
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Blue Yellow Tunnel by inacom
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apples-ishness

Commented on blue by xpilk.
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"This is a very lovely piece, I love the subtlety and the way you've coloured it, especially the wings and eye. I'm not an expert with dragons, but I think that if you add more detail in the scales it would really strengthen your whole concept. [...]"
Here is a selection of work created by the Commenter, apples-ishness.

Lean on Me by apples-ishness
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:icongisapizzatto:
GisaPizzatto Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Featured: [link]
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mantha1624 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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:icongisapizzatto:
GisaPizzatto Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
;)
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lorreinegeralde Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You should continue this. It helps some artists to gain attention in our art community! :#1:
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mantha1624 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
It will be an ongoing series. Thanks so much for checking it out. :D
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:iconlorreinegeralde:
lorreinegeralde Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :meow:
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DeskDeru Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Student Digital Artist
It's quite a nice idea :)
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mantha1624 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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CATtheMinion Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011   General Artist
WOOT! :iconlawooplz:
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mantha1624 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I think the WOOT :w00t: goes to all the great commenters!
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